I've always said that there are very few things that you can't say to someone, if you say it the right way.
Some of us are gentle until our buttons are pushed, usually one too many times. I'm not sure why that is, I suspect it is because they are already feeling quite vulnerable having an unmet need.
An example of this is: "You're always watching football" instead of "I miss you and want to spend time with you".
Good pictures and write up, overall its a fairly average profile. In the end I think the majority or us do want a successful and meaningful relationship but for now you have to just be cool and laid back about it all. Online dating is basically you trying to sell yourself. Try a pic where the camera is eye level instead of above your head, so they don't feel like they're looking down your shirt.
The one line that did stick out for me was I am actually looking for something serious right then and there I think marriage and you coming over to my house everyday. Oh and do keep the line I am not looking for a fling or hook-up or whatever. I'm guessing that with each of your pictures, the guys are trying to see as much of your boobs they can. You need to decide which part of yourself you're trying to sell and let them see that. Take a friend out and take some pics of you doing something active.
Just wondering if anyone has any constructive criticism for my profile.
I would like to recieve messages from more guys who are looking for a relationship and not just a booty call or fling.
Are you aiming strictly at people for their looks, rather than what you have in common?
Are you messaging people who don’t live within a reasonable distance?
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